This vase has an even more prominent neck and rim are than the vase on the previous page. This vase is still awkward, but it is much less awkward than the one we saw prior.
This is due to the sheer dominance of the neck and rim area. This dominance makes the neck look less like an inadvertent enlargement, and more like a deliberate visual declaration.

While evaluating this vase, also consider how this pot can be used.

Is it going to add or detract from anything which is placed in it, such as a flower arrangement. Function must merge with aesthetic if a vase is going to be anything more than a stand-alone object.